那麽,如何寫好中考作文?閱卷老師喜歡什麽樣的作文呢?
結合近幾年的中考作文的評分标準以及閱卷經驗,給同學們總結瞭(le)作文拿高分的技巧,供大家參(cān)考。
一、結構要清晰
結構清晰這點(diǎn)真的很重要,我們都知道,閱卷老師們要在規定的時間内批閱上千份作文,而清晰的結構,會讓閱卷老師一目瞭(le)然,自然就會喜歡你的作文。
什麽結(jié)構(gòu)好呢?那就是三段式。
第一段要開門見山,直接拿出主題。給大家舉個例子,比如,寫我的媽媽,第一段直接就說 My mother is a worker. She is beautiful and she is a good mother. 明確(què)自己的觀點(diǎn)。
第二段就要說,她爲什麽是一個(gè)好媽媽。1. She works hard. 2. She is very strict with me. 3. She always encourages me and help me when I am in trouble. 詳細說出媽媽的優點(diǎn)。
第三段得出結論。大家可以發(fā)表自己的觀點(diǎn),也可以提出建議和希望。如,I love my mother. I love my family!
二、時态要準確
英語作文除瞭(le)結構,還有一個是閱卷老師最敏感的,那就是時态,這也是一篇作文是否得高分的關鍵。要明確文章的時态、同時人稱要一緻、數要一緻、首尾要呼應。再根據内容要求,現確定事情是過去已經發生還是未來即将發生,比如記叙一件事要用一般過去時;寫經常發生的事或對人物的描寫,要用一般現在時;對於(yú)未來的憧憬要用一般将來時;過去的事情對現在造成的影響或過去延續到現在的狀況都用現在完成時。一定不能亂用亂配。
三、短語運用要靈活
同學們在寫作文的時候,要盡量使用有把握的詞,避免不必要的失分。當然,定語從句、賓(bīn)語從句等句型,在關鍵的時候用上一兩個,會增添你文章的文採(cǎi)。在英語中存在很多簡單又能表達很多意思的短語。這些短語的運用可以使作文更加原汁原味。
還有對關聯詞(cí)的使用,如first of all,secondly,finally,last,so that,in order that,not...but,not only...but also等。還可以使用高級點(diǎn)的如,in a word,all in all (表示總結的),but,yet,however(表示轉折)等。
經驗的閱卷老師很在意這些邏輯連接詞(cí),因爲這些詞(cí)體現瞭(le)整個文章的思路。
四、寫全要點
近年的各地中考英語提示性作文比較多,也就是說寫作内容幾乎都有要點提示,確(què)切地說就是給出寫作提綱,通常都是3 ~ 5個提示點,這種作文,同學們一定記住不要逐字翻譯,但是提示點必須在文章中有所體現。文章寫得再好,如果缺少瞭(le)要點就會扣分的。所以要點也就是文章的第二段内容,同學們要把提示點寫全,然後圍繞提示點充分發揮,豐富自己所寫的内容。
五、書寫要認真
這一點(diǎn)同學們必須高度重視,作文的書寫一定要保持規範(fàn)整潔,同一篇文章書寫規範(fàn)整潔的和書寫混亂的之間可以有2到5分的差距。
給閱卷老師留下最深刻印象的就是你的書寫,最簡單(dān)的得分點(diǎn)就是我們的認真書寫。工整漂亮的書寫會給評卷老師留下美好的第一印象和愉快的心情,在扣分時自然會“手下留情”。
大家切記(jì)不要塗改,在情況(kuàng)允許的前提下可以打些草稿。避免不必要的丢分。
漂亮的字體是可以練出來的,隻要大家在心裏注意瞭(le)自己的書寫,都會(huì)寫得很好。
作文評分标準
中考作文一般從(cóng)内容、語言、組織結構(gòu)這三方面進行評分(總分20分):
(一)内容(滿分8)
7-8分:内容切題,意思連貫(guàn),表達(dá)清楚、完整。
5-6分:内容基本切題,意思大緻連貫,表達(dá)基本清楚、但不夠(gòu)完整。
2-4分:内容不夠(gòu)切題,意思不夠(gòu)連貫,表達(dá)不夠(gòu)清楚、有些離題。
0-1分:文不對(duì)題,表達(dá)不清。
(二)語言(滿分8)
詞(cí)數:每少5個單(dān)詞(cí)扣0.5分,以此類推。隻寫出個别單(dān)詞(cí)、詞(cí)不成句不給分。
拼寫:每處(chù)錯(cuò)誤扣0.5分,同一錯(cuò)誤不重複計數。
語法:每處(chù)錯(cuò)誤扣0.5分,同一語法錯(cuò)誤不重複扣分。
标點符号、大小寫:每兩處(chù)錯(cuò)誤扣0.5分,但扣分總和不超過1分。
(三)組織結構(滿分4)
内容充實,上下文連貫,用語規範,表達準確(què),無語法錯誤;詞(cí)彙和句型句式運用恰當,多見好句型和習慣表達用語者,可給3-4分。
内容充實,不寫廢話,上下文連貫,用語規範,表達準確(què),無或少見語法錯誤;詞(cí)彙和句型句式運用恰當,多見好句型和習慣表達用語者,可給2分。
一般情況下,内容和語言累計(jì)得分在15分以上者(含),方可得到1-2分組織結構(gòu)分。
内容和語言在15分以下者,如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表達(dá),可酌情考慮給(gěi)1分組織結構分。
通篇句型句式單一、詞(cí)彙貧乏者,即使無語法錯(cuò)誤,一般也不予給組織結構分。
分類作文提綱
一、活動介紹類
首段:
(1) I’m pleased to know that you’re greatly interested in ... ,so I’d like to share a piece of good news that there will be a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information.
(2) It’s my great honor to invite you to enter a ... .Now,let me offer you some useful information about it.
(3) It’s time for us to say goodbye to our school life soon.Surprisingly,there is a/an... prepared for us.Now,let me offer you some information about it.
主體段:
1.時間(jiān)&地點(diǎn):The ... will be held in Classroom 302 at 3 o’clock in the afternoon on June 8th,2019.
2.内容:
(1)主題(tí)句:There will be various meaningful activities included in it.
(2)要點(diǎn):First of all,You will be invited to .../You will be given a chance to ... .which will ...
After that,It will be more than interesting for you to .../It will impress you a lot to ... so that ...
At last,doing sth. will play an important part in ... .So ...
尾段:
That’s all.I firmly believe that if you join in it,you will ... .
That’s all.I sincerely hope that you can come and share the happiness/fun with us.
二、寫人叙事類
首段:
(1) 朋友:A friend in need is a friend indeed.I have a friend just like that who often offers me much warmth in my life. Let me introduce him to you.
(2) 父母:If you ask me who is the most important one to me,without doubt,the answer is my ... . Let me introduce him to you .
(3) 老師(shī):In both my life and study,my ... teacher is special to me because he is not only my teacher but also my friend who has made a great difference to my character.
主體段:
1.外貌:... is very beautiful but a little fat with long hair and big eyes.
2.性格:...is an outgoing woman who always gets along well with people around her./ ... is very kind to others and easy to get on with./is so ready to help others that we all like to make friends with him.
3.愛(ài)好:She is especially good at cooking and often cooks different delicious foods for me.
4.事例:
(1)Linda is like an angel. Whenever I meet trouble, she will always be there. When I fail my test, She always encourages me to face the fact bravely and then tries to help me to check the reason why I fail. At the same time, she shares her good ways of studying with me.
(2)My Chinese teacher, Ms Li, not only teaches us how to learn, but also teaches us how to be a person. I remember I made a serious mistakes in Grade seven, that was to copy others’ homework. Ms Li knew that. Instead of being angry with me, she told me the importance of study and encouraged me to study hard to become a talented person in the future.
(3)Last term, I failed my exam. I was so that that I cried sadly in my room. When my mother came from work late, she talked with me patiently and cheered me up. That evening, when I woke up at night, my mother was still working. I was deeply moved. Then I made up my mind to study harder than before.
尾段:
As a sunshine teenager, Xiao Hui is a good example for us to learn from./I will treasure the friendship forever.
Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget what my father did for me and try my best to make him pleased.
He is an excellent teacher I will never forget and love him forever.
三、咨詢建議類
首段:
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in doing ... .Don’t worry about it!Here are some useful suggestions I ‘d like to share with you.
主體段:
1.主題(tí)句:Actually,if you are careful, you’ll find various simple ways to help you solve the problem.
2.要點:
First and foremost,It’s +adj/n.+for/of sb. to do ... .So that...
In addition,you are supposed to do ... ,which can not only ... but also ...
What’s more,you had better (not) do ... ,because ...
Last but not least,I suggest you (should) do ... ,from which,you’re able to do ...
尾段:
With these suggestions carried out,I firmly believe you will improve ... a lot.
I sincerely hope that my suggestions can be of great help.Looking forward to your earliest reply.
四、觀點看法類
首段:
With the development of the science and technology/society,...is becoming more and more serious./the problem about ... is under a heated discussion/ ... has become a hot topic.As for that,There are different opinions among people.
主體段:
On the one hand, some people hold the idea that ... .The reasons are as follows.First, ... .Second, ... .Last, ... .
On the other hand,others disagree.They suppose that ... .Because ... .More importantly, ... .
尾段:
As far as I’m concerned,every coin has two sides,and ... is not a n exception.As long as we treat ... properly,it will be of great help.
中考作文經典詞句
一、常用的名言警句
1. Actions speak louder than words. 事實勝於(yú)雄辯(biàn).
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患難(nán)朋友才是真朋友.
3. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成.
4. All roads lead to Rome. 條條大道通羅(luó)馬(mǎ).
5. Every man has his weak side. 人人都有缺點(diǎn)?
6. Failure is the mother of success. 失敗(bài)是成功之母?
7. Nothing in the world is difficult if you set your mind to it. 世上無(wú)難(nán)事,隻怕有心人。
8. A life without a friend is a life without a sun. 人若無(wú)友,就如同生命中沒(méi)有太陽。
9. All things are difficult before they are easy. 萬事開(kāi)頭難(nán)。
10. Always prepare for a rainy day. 未雨綢(chóu)缪。
11. Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。
12. Bad news has wings. 好事不出門,壞(huài)事傳(chuán)千裏。
13. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success. 你必須相信自己,這是成功的關(guān)鍵(jiàn)。
14. Don’t judge a man by his looks. 不可以貌取人。
二、常用過渡語
1. 表起始的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):first of all, to begin with, first and foremost等。
2. 表時間(jiān)的過(guò)渡語:first, at first, then, later, in the end, finally, afterwards, after that, since then, for the first time, at last, as soon as, the next moment, meanwhile, later on, soon, 等。
3. 表空間(jiān)的過(guò)渡語:on the right/left, to the right/left of, on one side of…on the other side of…, at the foot/top/end of, in the middle/centre of, next to, far from, in front of等.
4. 表因果的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):for, since,as,because of, thus, so, as a result (of)等.
5. 表轉折的過(guò)渡語(yǔ):but, yet, however, after all, in fact, while, on the contrary, instead of, although, otherwise, in spite of等。
6. 表列舉(jǔ)的過(guò)渡語:for example, such as, like, as follows, in other words, and so on等。
7. 表推進(jìn)的過(guò)渡語:on one hand… on the other hand…, in addition to, as well, still, also, in other words, not only…but also…, besides, in addition,furthermore, what’s more, moreover等.
8. 表總結(jié)的過(guò)渡語:in short, in a word, in general, in brief, in all, all in all,above all等.
三、常用句型
1.重點句型
1). It’s adj for sb to do 做…對(duì)某人來(lái)說…
2). …so … that … 如此… 以至於(yú)… …too … to do 太… 而不能… such … that … 如此… 以至於(yú)…
3). not…until… 直到…才…
例: I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back.
4).The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 … 的原因是…
The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生氣的原因是她對(duì)他說瞭(le)謊。)
5). That is why + 句子 那是…的原因
6). That is because + 句子 那是因爲(wèi)…
7). It is said that + 句子 據(jù)說… It is reported that + 句子 據(jù)報(bào)道…
8). There is no doubt that + 句子 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)…
9). It goes without saying that + 句子 不言而喻,毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)
10). There is no need to do沒(méi)必要做…
11). There is no point in doing 做某事毫無(wú)意義(yì)
2. 提建議
had better (not) do 最好(不)做
It’s +adj./n. of/for sb. to do
I suggest that you (should) do 我建議(yì)你做…
be supposed to do 應(yīng)該(gāi)做
If I were you, I would do…我要是你的話(huà),我會(huì)做…
Don’t forget to do=Remember to do...
Why not do / why don’t you do…? 爲(wèi)什麽(me)不…
How about / what about doing …怎麽(me)樣(yàng)?
3. 表示喜歡和感興趣
like / love doing=enjoy doing=be fond of doing 喜歡(huān)做…
prefer to do A rather than do B 甯(níng)願(yuàn)做A也不願(yuàn)做B
be interested in doing = show/ take great interest in n./ doing ... 感興(xìng)趣
4. .努力做…
try to do努力做… try one’s best to do= do one’s best to do 竭盡(jǐn)全力做…
make efforts to do = make every effort to do 盡(jǐn)力做…
do what sb can (do ) to do 盡(jǐn)力做…
spare no effort to do 不遺(yí)餘(yú)力的做…
do what / everything sb. can to do 盡(jǐn)某人全力做…
5. 打算做… / 計(jì)劃(huà)做…
intend / plan to do 打算做… be going to do 打算/計(jì)劃(huà)做…
decide to do 決(jué)定做… determine to do決(jué)定做…
make up one’s mind to do下定決(jué)心做…
6. 表示想/希望
want to do = would like to do 想做…
hope/wish to do 希望做… expect to do 期待著(zhe)做…
desire to do=have a great desire to do
7. 隻加doing作賓(bīn)語的動詞(cí)
finish / keep / practice / suggest / allow / consider / mind / miss / avoid / imagine / enjoy doing
固定搭配
look forward to doing 盼望做…keep on doing 堅(jiān)持做…dream of doing 夢(mèng)想做…
can’t help doing 情不自禁地做… keep / stop / prevent sb. from doing 阻止某人做…
be busy (in ) doing be busy with + 名詞(cí) 忙於(yú)做…
spend time / money (in )doing spend time / money on + 名詞(cí) 花費(fèi)時間做…
have fun / have a good time / enjoy oneself doing 玩得開(kāi)心